Re-designing a Web Page

I am currently working on re-designing this website for a friend of Sean’s. My first observation of it was that there is no real structure to the home page. It seems to link off to different pages with no real ‘web site’. Also it doesn’t state what the purpose of the web page is. As well as that there are little links all very close together on the core part of the page. Using Balsamiq I created a first draft design of the potential layout of the home page. Please have a look and let me know what you think and whether I can make any...